Affirmative Action for Boys
Gabriel
Ramiro
Period
A, Kringel
Should colleges give extra points to boys? Girls have been at quite the
disadvantage for some time now, but something huge is starting to happen. Girls
are starting to dominate the world! What's going to happen to the gender rate
at colleges and universities and what are boys going to do about this huge
event? In my opinion, I am for colleges giving boys extra points to get into
college. There needs to be balance in the boy-girl ratio in colleges. Boys need
this advantage. Girls are naturally better than boys in school.
There needs to be balance in the boy-girl ratio in college. I’m pretty sure
many girls wouldn’t want to go to a girl’s only university. Also, wouldn’t it
be strange if just girls were ruling the earth and no boys.
Boys need this advantage. Without it, girls would be the only ones getting into
colleges and universities. Women tend to have higher grades than men, so this
advantage will help achieve balance in colleges and universities.
Girls are naturally more patient in school. Guys are more irresponsible in
school. During school hours, boys are more energetic. I’m not saying all boys
are like this, but mostly are boys are like this. They aren’t that good in
staying in a classroom for long periods of time.
Giving boys extra points will help them in many ways. Balance is important in
colleges and universities. Advantages are needed for boys, but only if there
behind. Girls have much better school skills than boys. Advantages are given
all the time to people who are behind.
Fix last paragraph. Doesn't state all your ideas in the last paragraph.
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